A time to remember
by Obscura Nov 5, 2008
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This is a time to remember all the grief and the pain a country torn apart by war that will never be the same a time to remember the blood that was shed the feelings of hope fear and dread the men who lay down there live for humanity justice and all of mankind your bravery will live on it will not go unsung as you lived fought and died by the gun as you fought readily for our country and our freedom but years on you are still here you are in the soul of the nation in the heart of every patron your bravery heroism and memory will never be begotten our country is indebted to you and will never be forgotten |
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14 years agoby Em
Loved everything about thie poem. Flow, style, and especially the topic. Sometimes people don't realise just how much soldiers do for our country. Nicely expressed, 5/5. Em
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14 years ago
This is really good. its very expressive, and you did a good job writing this one.
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14 years ago
by Nobodys Hero
Another expressive poem - your style is very good =] The way you word your poetry adds more depth to the piece. Great job once again
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15 years ago
by Good Enough
Its so sad wat war can do to a country. we r splitting and its so terrible..
i love the flow. it really kept my attention. another great piece of work by you. keep up the good work. -
15 years ago
by Lauren
This is a great poem. It has a lot of feelings and emotion and glory in it. I really liked it. It's really well written and I think it is a really nice salute to the soldiers who are fighting.
A suggestion like violent said maybe change the format. other than that it is a really great poem. 5/5. Loved It!!
