As A Result

by Katie   Nov 6, 2008


I'm more than a little upset.
I'm lost,
Confused,
And disconnected.

Can't say it out loud
With fear of it being true.

Is it worth this?
No one may know.

Just say sorry.

May it never fix what's really wrong.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Wow, so much emotion and intensity in such a small write. Im amazed. Very powerful poem, and again, its so simply written. Nice choice of words. Im not sure what else to say, except its clear you write from the heart! =] which isnt always easy to do. So great work! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Very powerful lines, Katie.
    This is my first poem by you and I am coming back to read more.

    This poem was intensely sad, but written really well.
    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Awww... though this poem was only made up of a few lines, i can feel the sadness through the poem.Well if you don't say it out then no one will know, so yeah do talk to someone whom you can trust. Nicely done5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by SADADDY

    The reader can sense the sadness in these words you have expressed in this write…may you find the peace and joy that you seek deep within your heart once again soon….take care young lady.

    sadaddy

  • 15 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    I love this one!! 5/5