Breathe.. (String senryu)

How I loved this one as well. In this site of depression and cutters what a breath of fresh air you are ^-^ Keep up the wonderful work.

Feelings of peace and happiness can be felt when reading this poem. I really like the way the last line of each verse tie together. Those 3 lines could stand alone as another poem. It was a joy to read. Thanks for writing such wonderful verses.

"Beauty lives in smiles,
in a moment of kindness."

I can't agree anymore. Very warm and beautiful words you used in this poem. Great work. Take care

Wow. This was such a beautiful write. The last stanza had to be my favorite.. it just left me speechless... it was worded so perfectly. Keep it up. You are very talented. I don't think there's a form that you cannot write flawlessly.

Well done.
5/5.

You will get plenty of both from me, my friend!
So, this was the word of kindness and now...*smiles so sweetly*, ha ha ha!

I love this beautiful verse, Michael!

(((hugs)))

5/5 Ingrid