Okay..this was a VERY strong dark piece..why doesn't it have any rating >.< urgh sometimes I really do hate people on this site for not appreciating good poetry.
That was a very good one you penned here.
The wording was amazing and the stanzas were really strongly rhyming !
Falling from grace
Has a hard landing
But before I beg to live
I'll proudly die standing
This stanza..as a beginning one, was just so catchy and perfect..submitting it as the first one made me completely interested in reading the poem.
I won't be taken easily
I refuse to go without a fight
I'll die for what I believe
Whether or not I'm wrong, I'm right
This one I liked too SO MUCH..I'm gonna recommend this poem to my pals :) you did a wonderful job on this one.
I seriously like it..I'm gonna fave it !!