Mirror Mirror

by Mummy to a beautiful baby girl   Nov 18, 2008


She looks in the mirror and sees a scared little girl looking back.

She looks in the mirror and sees the innocence she lost.

She looks in the mirror and sees how much he had changed her.

She looks in the mirror and sees how hard she has had to fight.

She looks in the mirror and sees tired she really is.

She looks in the mirror and sees how much she just wants to give up.

She looks in the mirror and sees what she wants others to see.

She looks in the mirror and sees the letter.

She looks in the mirror and says good bye for good.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    This poem is very vague , simple , and open . It could use some embelishing , since free verse poems need to work a little harder to make an impact . Nice use of repetition though , 5/5 .

  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    I can relate. But i agree with twistedsoul ^^ the flow is a bit messy. but apart from that it was great. nice work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Nobody

    Its really good you just need to work on the flow a little bit but its really good and the emotion is strong good job

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