Please, let me thank you (rap)

by Dustin S   Nov 25, 2008


How could I not notice, that you've been hurt?
Im suppost to be helping you, not make feelings dirt.
Maybe you don't see my point, but I promise you will.
Untill I can sleep fully, then I'ma tell you my fill.
I've hesitated, and now it's like a riddle.
Between the two, before the the after, in the middle.
When you see me angered, its for a certain reason.
It's cause you should be realxed, not in hurtin season.
RIP Joe, you've taught your daughter great,
And your absence now, that is a dislike, a hate.
Yes I know, that this is a touchy subject,
But for her to be getting hurt, that I object.
Back to you, and the bullies up in the school,
I'll try my best to end that, for your not a fool.
Things are said, and you defend for your rep,
Well I'm here to assist, take the next step.
When you think it can get no worse, I'll give aid,
And not worry abgout a re-pay, your smile to me's paid.
I need no chorus, just to heed your advice,
And I barely catch my mistakes, like a device.
You make me cry, when I need to release,
And you make me laugh, and continue to increase.
So in return, I will give you my power, my strengh,
To go that extra mile, hit the extra length.
While other people say, your just an ache tool,
I beg to differ and say, Please, let me thank you.

*From my heart*

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  • 15 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    * wipes eyes* bro, ur amazingly sweet. this was amazing and i'm glad you finished it. i loved it. 5/5
    <3 harlea