Your poem is beautiful... it has a feeling of unity and passion bound to the truest love...
I find it absolutely wonderful...
5/5
*keep up*
isabel

Only one thing I see wrong with the poem. Many people think that poems don't need punctuation or just prefer them that way. Well, sorry to say but that's not right. When you read a poem (the correct way) you are suppose to stop at punctuation marks. EVERYTHING except Periods (.) and Dashes (-) you should stop for just a second, but he periods and dashes a bit longer. I'm not saying an actual second but I'm sure you get the point. Therefore when you read it the punctuation helps or messes up the flow. Which is why it's needed. This poem doesn't need hardly any. A few commas and periods here and there.

Other than that, amazing poem.

Naww. it is such a beautiful poem =)
I love the passion that you portray, and the feeling of love all around.
I loved some of the words used, such as "red stemmed rose".
Just beautiful. Well done. =)
4 / 5
xox

When two hearts beat as one the healing transgresses into the spiritual realm as this poem reflects so beautifully. I love it

This was a really sweet love poem =] Im glad you have a certain boy like this in your life, it is really hard to find someone like that these days trust me =] so keep this one.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Beautiful Poem, Well Penned!!!

Wow. this is a beautiful poem indeed. I love how you told of the sweet things he left around the house for you, to remind you of how much he loves you. especially the red rose next to your keys.. 'key to your heart' that is SO sweet and amazing. This is the true love that everybody dreams about.. and you wrote it so well.
i really did enjoy reading this one.
5/5

Kel,
One can tell from reading this you love your husband very much:)
I love the free verse format, because it allows you so much freemdom in expressing yourself.
A beautiful and tender love poem:)

Hugs,
5/5 Ingrid

This poem is very good i rate it 4/5 :P keep it up!

I really enjoy love poems the best, but there are very very few people who can put what they feel into words. I loved your poem and I could feel the love between you and that special somebody in your life...it reminded me a lot of my fiancee and I. We do adorable things like that for eachother all the time and I'm glad you have somebody who makes you smile :) Excellent job 5/5 GG23

I enjoyed that a lot!!
I just love romantic poems, this one was a cute romantic one, cute the flower beside ur keys and the chocoate kisses and the meaning of them...
I feel the same way towards my love so I totally felt you...
iked it, keep writting :), gud luk in life :)...

You express this poem very beautifully and very carefully, which makes it a wonderful delight to read. your romantic poems seems to be my current addiction

Well done

Excellent poem, but it needed pnctuation. I find that strongly important for the flow to be better. I like that it was free verse. And the topic was displayed very well.

Krista

Wow this is one of the most romantic poems that I have ever read. It is so sweet and filled with thoughts and feelings of love. 5/5

Wonderful piece, very passionate and loving. You put feeling into the words, and each line was portrayed beautifully. I do think you need punctuation, so it reads better, that way its will look better and be easier to read. Keep writing, always and forever...

A very gentle touch and a very good expression i find in this poem , and i find many of your poems jsut go arround this perfect man you are having , the loving and caring and understanding one .

keys to the hearts.. how a godo expression and yet a very godo metaphorical image that really express that attraction and impact somone can mean to another , that lokk that can capture your eyes and your heart in a single look.

this was a great a very great flow and expression , but it lacked the structure and the rhyming , it was good the way you got the feelgins out an the expression in words , but i would loved if you could rhyme it or section it

if you put a whole paragraph of words the eye of the reader will jsut refuse to read no matter how good the poem is

sectioning is important ^_^_

great one again ^_^