Burning Desire (collab)

by SashaMirage   Dec 4, 2008


You walk past me as I take a sip from my glass
you turn around and give me a second glance
your smoky eyes and the red blood dress
got me confused with what's love and lust

As our eyes meet, in my mind I smirk
Knowing our fate has met a quirk
Whats this feeling, I can't describe
Your eyes say lust, yet I feel another vibe

It's like being in a movie but we're the actual cast
with the speed of light it just happens so fast
within this time there's no future nor there's no past
there's nothing for us to discuss

I take your face into my hand
I know that you will understand
You are everything I can't resist
I feel that you need to be kissed

As my hands venture down under
you leave me with red marks all over
As I pass through the hollow cave
you breathe in deep to what you crave

Being pound over and over again
like a waterbreak hit by the waves
you're nothing more than just a slave
that never wishes to be saved

Shaking thoughts insinuating you to be my treasure
You take everything I give, Oh, what pleasure
You have my body burning on fire
This can't be more than lustful desire

Crazily, as this might sound insane
you crave to be in pain
clearly aware of the game
you refused to extinguish the flame

Do you lack emotion or feel the same?
Tell me shall I burn alive in this flame?
The look on your face leaves me confused
Do you want love or do you like being used?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Nice :) very well written and the collab worked extremely well.
    Very sensual and steamy.... nice lol.
    keep up the fantastic work :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Very, very nice dear people!
    It was hot and steamy alright!
    I could not really tell who wrote what, so.. hats off:)

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    You guys did an amazing poem. Very romantic and sensual. it merits 5/5. Also i came across your poems and i enjoy your writing. Keep it up, kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Hehe i'm so happy to have worked with a talented person like you too...you're an amazing poet...you really make the poem stands out with your magical touches n ur ingenious creativity that smoothly intertwine your words and mine

    yup we really did a good job
    but i couldn't have done it without you
    Thx Buddy;)