Im Sorry

by stella   Dec 4, 2008


Im sorry im not perfect
that im not elegant and smart
im sorry im not her
that she's everything im not.

im sorry that i love you
and that you wont leave my mind
im sorry i dont hate you
that your memory keeps me preoccupied.

im sorry for acting
the way that i did
im sorry for being irrational
but i was just a kid.

im sorry for everything
but mostly for losing your trust
im sorry for thinking-
for you there was no love; just lust.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    That your memory keeps me preoccupied.
    That i can't leave you behind .
    ^^ that rhymes and flows better with your poem : )

    The flow is really off in your third stanza , and your last stanza isn't really a strong finish . Theres some work to be done but good job , 5/5 !