Divine (collab)

by SashaMirage   Dec 11, 2008


With thoughts of you racing through my mind
Separated by distance, yet with one thought intertwined
I can no longer hide my words behind
I want to know are our feelings aligned

So lovely so beautiful and so kind
Your romantic words always on my mind
I think of you be it rain or shine
I want to take your hand in mine

Bound to the wall of my country, confined
Will not stop our love from going beyond the line
For your name is upon my heart signed
Wherever you are, you'll be my holy shrine

You have my heart, to you its forever inclined
Every second I'm without you , you're words i rewind
Thoughts of you are better than love and lust combined
Wrapping around your heart endless entwine

Are you my soul mate that God assigned?
Are you the one i choose above all man kind?
Tell me shall i wait for more vital signs?
Or is this love just truly divine?

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  • 15 years ago

    by kate

    I really like this poem alot. it flowed very nicely when I was reading this it kinda reminded me in some parts of Romeo and Juliet how you honesty would go behind someone's back or even a "country" to get to the one you love. Its true, if your in love you'll try anything and everything in your power to have that one person around you.

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Well i read this on Azza's account.. and i thought it was simply amazing :)
    Awesome collab. It really was a great love poem. the last stanza was probably my favourite now that i have read it again, because i love the rhetorical questions.. they are there.. but no one really knows the answers...
    keep up the great work.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    I can feel the love throughout this poem. So many persons can relates to this. I think Azza is a great choice to do such a poem with. You two did exceptionally great. I enjoy reading love poems and the two i red that you guys wrote is simple my favorite. Reading this poem it's like two hearts fused to make one. I'm sure all those unanswered questions, if you seek deep within your heart, there are answers. I enjoy your write, keep it up, kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    It's truely divine writing with you, i really had a great time doing this with you... hopefully this is just the tip of the ice berg for us;)

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