Yesterday

by Grandpoet   Dec 13, 2008


Twas only yesterday,
When i fell in love with an angel,
And gave her the keys to my heart.
Only yesterday...
She confessed her love to me,
And merged her soul into mine, becoming one.
The day before today,
She took my hands gently
And led me gracefully through the labyrinths of her heart.
My friends, twas only yesterday
When she promised me of a tomorrow,
With her in eternal bliss.
Only yesterday...
An angel was sent to me from heaven
To re-define the special meaning of love.
The day before today, people,
She let me drink from her cup of love,
(...to my fill) ;
She let me in on her inner darkness
And left me insatiated yenning for her love.
Brothers,twas only yesterday,
When she candidly closed her eyes,
Passionately embraced my kiss,
Shedding a tear for the love shared;
Only yesterday...
She swore to share in my dreams,
And ultimately die in my arms;
Twas the day before today,
Twas only yesterday,
Only yesterday...
But today she's no more...she's gone!

Pliz do rate and comment on ths poem,wud rily appreciate it.thanx

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  • 15 years ago

    by Monica93

    I liked it. I like the type of writing that you used. but i agree with sepertating the stanzas just to make it a little easier to break apart. But other than that i really do like it. It sorta reminds me of a version of Romeo and Juliet in a way!! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Ok i read it and the flow is jsut amaizing , but a few pointers ,

    when you do a long 1 block poem , it jsut make the eye of the reader refuse to look , it would be best to seperate them bu stanza since the flow do seperate it by "only yesterday"

    i lvoed it simplicity , and the emotion behind it made me relate in very close way ,..

    i love fre verse but a strong poem , always have rhyming to push the intensity of it ...

    5/5