Why?

This is a rare love poem that seems to have contained in it a desire to be honest. I like the style but the main reason I believe it deserves a five is the pouring out of true feelings in an eloquent poem.

Just tell me why
Why you can't look me in the eyes
& admit what you did
Instead of keeping everything hid
I just want the truth

^for some poeple it trulie hard to tell the truth. it's simple for others n difficutly to others. we just hope they're say in is true. n trusting them. the flow was nice. a strong way of openin your pieces. in my mind sounded like your were yellin for sum reason.

I believed in you with all I had
Now I'm pissed off and mad
At me & at you
Not knowing what to do
Who's fault is this really

^powerfule words indeed here. i like it. i wouldnt change a word or thing here.

Mine for trusting you
Or yours for the things you do
Every time I call
You don't answer, another tear falls
With out you I see myself so differently

^awww.. trulie sad. i like how u ended with a emotion strong and sading. nicely done

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy