If I could...

by Bhavin   Dec 18, 2008


Sometimes I wonder, if I could just
Fill up my heart, with love, till the brink
Excitingly waiting to go back home
And pouring out my love to her and shrink
In her waiting arms as all my sentiments roam.

Sometimes I wonder, if I could just
Caress her hairlocks and get them unplugged
As she combs her hair, waiting eagerly for me
I grab her from back and gift her a bear hug
Surprisingly she smiles and makes me tire free.

Sometimes I wonder, if I could just
Fill my mouth with words full of praises
That boosts her ego and makes her love me more
As I hand out a bouquet filled with roses and daisies
And take out her emotions that remains unexplored.

Sometimes I wonder, if I could just
Drive away her pains, her griefs and dissatisfactions
For all those moments when I left her isolated
By gifting her a kiss for her neverending affections
And give her all my love, as the time stands waited.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Well Bhavin...if you give her this poem, I am sure she will know just how much you love her:)

    Sometimes I wonder, if I could just
    Drive away her pains, her griefs and dissatisfactions
    For all those moments when I left her isolated
    By gifting her a kiss for her neverending affections
    And give her all my love, as the time stands waited

    ^^^

    My favorite stanza, wanting to drive away all that may discomfort her is such a true sigh of devotion:)

    Good job!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 17 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This is absolutely a beautiful love poem. This is my favorite stanza "Sometimes I wonder, if I could just
    Drive away her pains, her griefs and dissatisfactions
    For all those moments when I left her isolated
    By gifting her a kiss for her neverending affections
    And give her all my love, as the time stands waited."
    My goodness, when we love someone, if we could take away all the pain and sorrow , we're will to share it or keep it all for ourselves just to make the one that our hearts beats for to be happy.
    All i can say my friend, don't wonder sometimes, just make it happens. Sitting and day dreaming is only a comfort to the mind, but think of the heart? Find that inner force that will pushes you to go forward.
    I enjoy my read. Keep on writing. It merits 5/5, kel.

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