An Impossible Find (Collaboration with Kelleyana)

by Bhavin   Apr 15, 2009


Sitting aimlessly near the window panes
Familiar thoughts run across my mind
Tears being just a synonym to the outside rains
Joy seems to be just an impossible find.

Wondering anxiously about the nature's law
I seem to be blessed with a very selective mind
All that is traceable is fault and flaw
Good memories seem to be an impossible find.

Traumas given importance with faith at stake
Negativity all around cause eyes go blind
Hope being a treasure, difficult to rake
Happiness seems to be an impossible find.

Clouded by unpleasant memories that nag the brain
In the web of despair I get myself entwined
Making things complex, life does not seem the same
I guess a happy mind is an impossible find.

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  • 13 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is surely one of the best collab read. I really loved the theme as that made me think again and again. Also it made me realize that i am not the only one having such thoughts.
    Great write indeed.

    Hope to find more from you both in coming days.

    all the best and take care

  • 13 years ago

    by Faithless

    What a powerful collaboration the 2 of you. The 1st stanza pulls me right into the poem. I like the imaginary presented in the poem along with how you guys poured down your thoughts.I also like how you repeatedly used 'an impossible find' through out the stanza.It really work for me in this case. I was totally blown away with how you guys end it. The choice of words and how it was placed in the sentence was superb. Both your words just melts together into 1.

    Excellent Job
    5/5 from me

  • 13 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Well done on the collab, cannot tell there were two writers. Sometimes happiness, joy do seem to be an impossible find to all of us but with luck we can eventually find them. Good job.

  • 13 years ago

    by kelleyana

    I like the concept of this poem, yet it really sad and dark. I just realize that i don't have too much of a dark side . I always believe that after the rain the sun will shine again. Check out my original. Very well done, next time i hope you call on me to write a happy poem with you. Let your light shine in the dark. Very well done my friend. 5/5, kel.

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    You both did a good job on described how hopeless one can feel at times. I really felt sad reading all the ways in which you cannot find happiness and joy.

    Good job to the both of you!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid