Sleepless Nights (Sad Version)

by Bhavin   Oct 27, 2009


For how many nights,
you want me to shed tears silently.
Imagine one sleepless night,
how it feels?
Answer me honestly

Eyes have swollen,
tears have frozen.
I wonder if you could
imagine one sleepless night
how it feels?...

How it feels
to be hopeless
how it feels
when life seems meaningless
how it feels...
When you cry yet
The world cannot imagine...

Yet...
the world cannot imagine
the sound of my silence
the visions of my blindness
as this was the world,
That you had created
While filling my empty void
During those days when we dated

Now those days are gone,
like a flower it is wilted
now it is me and a sleepless night,
crying in the dark all alone,
all I had was a candle...
Now even that is melted.

All I can do now
is do nothing...
except waiting
for a ray of hope
for a new dawn from rising!

Waiting to see if ever
This sleepless night will be over....

BY: BHAVIN SHAH & GORAN RAHIM
(This poem was written during a half hour of word exchange by BHAVIN & GORAN

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  • 12 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This poems really touches me. So truthful, yet sad indeed. I don't understand why some people take it a pleasure to down vote great poems of others, anyway for me it is a well written piece. 5/5, kel.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lynn Anderson

    Kept me reading, wanting more the whole time. Much like a good song. Great job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Very nice work on this collab, gentlemen...seemless, sad and well penned:)

    God bless:)

    5/5 Ingrid