Drowning in My Daydream

by Broken   Jun 9, 2004


You put your arms around me
And stare into my eyes
You tell me you love me
And I know its no lie

With my arms around you
My eyes stare back
I am lost in this moment
With you as my prize

I gently awaken
With a kiss from your lips
I close my eyes
And move my hands to your hips

You draw back
And I feel you hand
Slowly brush against my cheek
Making me crave more

As I lean in for another kiss
In the distance I faintly hear
Someone chanting my name
Its then I realize this isn't real

I open my eyes
And you're not there
You're still gone
Drowning in my daydream

**please comment!!!

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    simply amazing poem! it was lyke i was there...

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    ncie poem :) very wellwritein :)
    -Mortalidaga
    xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Broken

    OMG u guys...its just a dumb nickname! lol...u r fighting over me...i kinda like that....lol...im just jokin....I LUV U TOO SIERRA!!! I LUV U TOO MEGAN!! Thankx for always being there for me!

  • 19 years ago

    by Sierra Rae

    errrr!!!! THE NEXT PERSON THAT STEALS MY NICKNAME FOR HER IS GONA GET HURT!!! MEGAN AND SAM, YOU CAN'T CALL HER THAT!!! (WELL MEGAN, YOU CAN I GUESS...LOL) PPL STOP STEALIN MY NAME!!!!!

    P.S.-LOVE YA MUR!! GREAT POEM!! (AGAIN)

  • 19 years ago

    by Sierra Rae

    I miss you too Myrrh!!! (like the new spelling...lol) That one is really really good just like ur otha ones...hope 2 see you soon, and keep writing!!

Read All Comments (6)

More Poems By Broken