My Dear Amanda

by Soulful Ensemble   Dec 19, 2008


My dear Amanda with the golden hair
Don't mess around with a man who doesn't care.
He's using you for what he wants
And leaving all doors open so that he can flaunt.

But those doors all seal when you get close
And who knows whats going on behind them.
You might feel in love but who really knows
If there is even a heart inside him.

If he can laugh as you cry
And he can look you in the eye
Then you should run away and hide
Because he doesn't want you as his bride.

I know you want someone who will always pay attention
And look you in the eye like he has nice intentions.
If he's not that way then its time to look away
And you're better off without him anyway.

You deserve the love you give returned
Because nobody's heart should be burned.
If you stretch your arms to take his hands
They should not be knocked down like sand.

I hope you watch out for your soul
And find a love to make you whole.
Remember you're always in control
And your heart will be consoled.

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  • 15 years ago

    by mandy

    Very beautiful, 5/5.

    -mandy :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Joshua Lee

    I like this poem and the rhyming, but some lines dont match the same syllables, creating an uneasy rhyme scheme. Overall its very nice and true.