How i feel about you

by Mary   Dec 21, 2008


Loving you is so hard to describe
Like words locked up in my heart
With no way to come out
But what i feel now is just so great
The way you make me smile no matter what
And how ur sweet words mend my broken heart
You are my only best friend
And the only one I need
The center of my world
My own addicting weed
I will cry for you
I will die for you
But im just waiting for you
To feel the same way
How much emptiness can someone feel
When the other is away
When you are gone
Even just for a day
My sun dissapears
And there comes the rain
Please come back
And make the frown go away
Please come back
And tell me you love me
All i need to hear
Are those three simple words
All i need right now
Is for you to show that you care

Ehhh..... not one of my best pieces ... but at least now my mind is cleared up =)

DOnt forget to leave ANY commnets.... good/ bad =)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jess

    I love all of your poetry.
    he ones i read anyways.
    :))
    this poem in by far my favorite though.
    I dont know why, it just is.
    dont stop writing, you have some real potential.

    And it would be greatly appriciated if you could comment and rate one of my poems.
    thanks love!

    -jesss.
    Btw:: Im putting you in my favorites ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by ToRn iiN2 PeIcEs

    I really like this
    its cute and its written well
    and your a verry good writer
    5/5

    p.s. thanks for ur comment :)

  • 17 years ago

    by xx

    You asked me for the truth;;so here goes:
    I do like it, because I like the emotion of it. But it is kind of random and the rhyme scheme is on and off. It's a good poem, like I said it would be(; It seems to come from the heart.

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