Lights, Camera, Action

by SashaMirage   Dec 22, 2008


Will you hold on tighter, or will you just let go?
Sorry, but where it is I stand, i really need to know?
You say that I'm your everything, an angel so pure.
But what if you see a flaw, will you still be so sure?

Because I'm standing here alone with fear in the dark
Will I burn alive in the flames because of a spark?
Will you stay or will you leave, when will I know?
I just have to tell you one thing...this is not a show

Ready set, lights, camera, action
Is this all a movie scene?
Will you press the stop, eject
Is this all just a dream?

You say that you will come for me when the time is right
I'm so in love with you, you're my only sunlight
Will I stumble in the dark, now my backs against the wall?
Will you be here to catch me before I fall?

Take your hand off the fast forward, your moving way to fast
Take it day by day, Prove to me that it will last
Every word you're saying has me completely mesmerized
I don't want to find out too late what I could have realized

Ready set, lights, camera, action
Is this all a movie scene?
Will you press the stop, eject
Is this all just a dream?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You say that you will come for me when the time is right
    I'm so in love with you, you're my only sunlight
    Will I stumble in the dark, now my backs against the wall?
    Will you be here to catch me before I fall?

    ^^^^These are lines many will be able to relate to. Sometimes it is so difficult keep the faith and you feel so lost...

    I think this is a beauitful poem and I have no idea why someone downvoted you, Sasha!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    For me it was alrite. it was so touching like the last one i read. sumthing was missing from this poem.idk what but yeah. it was nice
    4/5 for me.

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Thanks for the advice and I will be changing it to those first two phrases. I appreciate your advice and opinion.

  • 15 years ago

    by Teria

    I really like this poem. I'm not too fond of the beginning. For one reason and one reason only - it lacks words. I know that sounds a bit off. And, this is only my opinion, probably not everyone elses. I believe sometimes things need to be 'wordy' to sound better.

    Will you hold on tighter, or let go of my hand?
    I'm sorry, but I need to know where I stand.
    You say that I'm your everything, an angel so pure.
    But what if you see a flaw, will you still be so sure?

    [Will you hold on tighter, or will you just let go?
    I'm sorry, but where it is I stand, i really need to know.
    You say that I'm your everything, an angel oh so pure.
    But what if you find a flaw, will you still be so sure?]

  • 15 years ago

    by H E Losey

    Could not find the beat/rhythm in your words.

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