Ghosts

by xToBeWithYoux   Dec 22, 2008


Whispers of forgotten dreams
float around my bedroom.

I am alone
in my sleep deprived state,
so no one can confirm my discoveries.

My loved ones,
cherished in their fulfilled lives,
live again in this celestial moment.
They awaken from their dormant memories
in my now confused mind.

Radiating the purest light,
my family glides out of my window
into the starless night,
leaving my room forgotten, once again.

In my dreams, they shall live on.
I have learnt from this blessed haunting
that you should never attempt to hold on:

Their light will shine upon the world,
bringing the most ironic gift of all:
Light, life, purity, hope,
from those who died of the darkest sins.

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  • 15 years ago

    by LiveLoveLearnDie

    Wow!
    This poem is truely powerful. It has lots of enrgy put into it with not so much energy needed to do so..(if you get what I mean?).
    I loved the start!
    Whispers of forgotten dreams
    Float around my bedroom.
    ^
    This really gets us wanting to read more and more. You provided us with an interesting poem with great use of words!

    however I think you need to be careful with the length of your stanzas in this poem as some are 3 lines and some 4. I'm not sure if this is intended? Netherthless a great write.

    Natalia

  • 15 years ago

    by meganmarie

    Beautifully written. this poem is amazing. full of emotion and depth. i love it.
    --lovedroughtmelody