The World is Changing

by Jennifer   Dec 24, 2008


Times are moving quick,
the skys are starting to fall,
nothing will be left,
for I have witnessed it all,
you cant change its fate,
only wait and watch it all.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    This was really good. I think you need to add to it though, because i think it needs more of a better way to wrap it up.. ya no? Like i think it needs to be longer, and also to have more of an ending. The line you used to finish it just didnt seem right for an ending. But yeh. apart from needing to be longer it was really very good.

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