When you were away

by Mary   Dec 26, 2008


Did u ever think about me
Did u think about me everyday
Did u ever think about me
When u were away

Did u ever look through your contacts
And stare at my name
Did u forget
That we were thousands of miles away

Well ill tell u this for sure
When you were away
My mind was a blur
Every single day
Ill admit to you
Ill admit that i felt depressed
Ill admit that wen u were gone
My heart wouldn't rest

Every morning
When i woke up
You were the first thing on my mind
Every night
Before i slept
You're face was the last thing i would find

I would find myself everyday
In a state of confusion
Me living a week without you
Felt a lot like an illusion

I cant wait until you return
I cant wait to give u a hug
Your face and voice
Is what i yearn
Ur like my own addicting drug

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  • 14 years ago

    by brie kelly wise

    I like how you expressed it and I'm guessing it's somewhat about a long distance relationship? Good work(:

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I wil admit the flow and expression of this piece are good ,
    but you made like fatal errors for a reader eye it is not good if you do like 1 block of poetry the eye will get tired try decomposing to stansaz

    and the rhyming was very weak , it can be better with a bit of an effort!!

    great one