by Deana Dec 31, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Dreams no longer sustain the heart |
by ben thompson
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AN OUTSTANDING WRITE. PERFECT FLOW, PAINTS A BEAUTIFUL PICTURE OF SADNESS. 5/5 FROM ME. ALL THE BEST BEN THOMPSON |
by Kuro
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I liked how it rhymed but i had some trouble understanding what is was about |
by Ingrid
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Congrats on the win! |
by Corinne
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Well dones. You have some really nice couilets/imagery going on here. |
by Ignoris
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Your words always seem to flow so easily and powerfully. Very well done! |