It can't rain all the time

by LitxUpxWithxLife   Jan 1, 2009


When your chips are down, and your plans unclear.
Everyone hides their darkest shades of fear.
They all look for a place to turn and hide.
Searching for someone, anyone, on their side.

It's too bad that they can't see one simple truth.
Something proved real since our youth.
Just one plain fact, No more rhythm or rhyme
The truth of the matter is, It can't rain all the time.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Blissful

    The truth behind this poem was filled with so much power and meaning. It was short and to the point without excess words which was great. Great message behind it and overall a great write. Congrats on the win! Well deserved.

    *5/5*
    :]

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow this poem certainly makes sense.I like how you used the weather as metaphor to bring your message across. Well in this life thing doesn't really always go our ways... you we must learn to accpet te cold hard truth. I think you have penned down a beautifully crafted piece

    Excellent Job
    5/5 from me

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    I thought this was a very good piece :]
    It is uplifting in a strange way.. so thankyou for uplifting me :]
    its true though right, it cant rain all the time. There is always the pretty rainbow after the rain :]
    nice work. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by oddi tea

    AMAZING! Perfect rhymes, Just...I am left speechless! I love the way you sum it all up at the very end in hope and you begin the poem in a darker mood. WONDERFUL!! SOOO a 5/5!

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    I read this twice , very short but with the most powerful of words. A positive look to the coming of sunrise basically , Great job and thought provoking

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