Stupid Girl

by Mess Of A Dreamer   Jan 5, 2009


I look in the mirror
And all I see
Is the broken down person
You've caused me to be.

My eyes are swollen
lips formed in a frown
the one who made me happy
has beaten me down.

I put on a smile
But it's not the same
You killed the person I was
With your stupid games.

I trusted and loved you
and was always there
STUPID GIRL,this is what happens,
When you actually CARE.

**Needs work so constructive criticism is greatly appreciated! :)**

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  • 14 years ago

    by Rae Rae

    I really like this poem its really good.
    Keep writing, and maybe could you read a few of my poems and tell me what you think. I'd like to hear your opinion :)

  • 15 years ago

    by XxEmotionally TakenxX

    I agree with that guy..very good and gets right to the point.. i can relate to this poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by Deathcanwait

    Tis a nice idea. and often what people want to say after a break up when they realise they've wasted their time. it flows nicely too, short n sweet. me likes =]

    Keep hope

    Matt
    x

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