Forbiden Love!

by Mister 47   Jan 8, 2009


Seeing you with those eyes don't seem I deserve
How can this beauty of yours, be preserved
A lovely fairy tale, your eyes always speak
The shyness of your heart always shown on your cheeks

How can beauty such this, in one person reside
My feelings are so intense I can feel them collide
But the mouth cannot say such words for you
A deep pathway separate us the two

I wish Romeo was here to make him shy
The beauty I see, just make me fly
My words for you are carefully chosen
So it seem my feelings are actually frozen

It is hard that you seek sometimes to hide
Because it is forbidden for me to take your side
But I think life have more to offer you and me
I think if I want it hard enough I believe it will be

Remember to never let go a dream in your heart
You have to work for it sometimes very hard
I know I want you, I wanted from long ago
You were taken so my words wouldn't show

But now, the chance I have, my heart can see
It is time to unleash what I feel and be free
Maybe I will win or lose that is up to fate
I just hope in this, that I am not too late

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  • 8 years ago

    by Dragon Boy

    Very nicely written

  • 8 years ago

    by Dragon Boy

    Very nicely written

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    What a sweet poem CJ. You really do have a softer side to you and it comes out in your poetry. I hope you showed this to the girl you wrote it about, because it was very sweet. Forbidden love is extremely hard im sure, so good luck with it, if its what you and her really want, then im sure it will work out. The flow was really good and so was the rhyme. Another excellent poem.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    Well well well playboy. :)
    Very sweet. Who knew you were such a romantic?
    I loved it. I was riveted the whole way through. The concept of forbidden love is very hard to capture, but I think you did it wonderfully. We should see about doing a collab. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    But now, the chance I have, my heart can see
    It is time to unleash what I feel and be free
    Maybe I will win or lose that is up to fate
    I just hope in this, that I am not too late

    ^^^The second line of this stanza is my most favorite line. To unleash how you feel is so very liberating. To tell the other one how you feel is frightening and fear of rejection is always there.
    I love this poem, Moucha..you have such a tender heart:)
    I hope she will see this too and accept you into her heart:)
    Much luck, my friend..I will keep them crossed for you!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

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