by Shannon Pyscotic Jan 9, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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I am very rusty at this. I'm sorry if it's no good. |
by Lady Nik
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Great work. loved it. Shanik |
by Saving Grace
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Wow. This is really sad. Its written simply, and short, but the emotions and intensity has been packed into this short poem. It was descriptive, and really allows the reader to understand whats going on ya no? If that even makes sense? Anyway, it flowed really well and the rhyme scheme was well written. I think this poem is well beyond creative. Well done. 5/5 |