This heartbreak

by haily   Jan 14, 2009


Its been so long since ive seen your face
please excuse my silence
but i dont think you know your place
its not in my heart
you ripped and tore it apart
now you want me back
but its not that easy
it seems as though you always want to see me
i think you should call it quites
im not the same girl i was back then
you just wouldnt know me anymore
maybe we should keep it that way
im not about to deal with this heartbreak for another day

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  • 14 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    The poem had a awesome flow almost like a song until the line that ened with see me
    and then you stop the flow with < I think we should call it quits I'm not the same girl I was
    befor and then you go back to the flow with your last two lines which rhym perfect check it out see if you agree you want your
    poem to just roll off your tongue so that it keeps the flow going like " roses are red
    violents are blue I wish I was there kissing
    you" see how that sings that is how your poem was until the part I told you about I hope you like my help it suck when you can't
    say anything to any body you know like they take it as a insult. I'd been a fan of your
    poetry a long time. what did you do with all your old stuff I hope you save all them there
    must have been 50 or more you deleted

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