by Ash Jan 15, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
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Wrong was I to make you my life, |
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Interesting poem my fren.. keep it up |
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Great emotions and feeling in this piece...Very heartfelt and deep...The flow was a bit choppy in places and the repetition of the first stanza three other times in your poem really ruined it for me, cause those four lines each started with "wrong was I..." Otherwise a enjoyable read. 4/5 from me, take care and keep writing, always and forever... |
by J4Y
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Amazing poem.... i love it!! its so well written... id giv it more than 5/5 if i could |