I'm Sorry...

by Benny Boi   Jan 16, 2009


Sorry I left you wallowing,
Let me make it up to you,
I apologies for the following,
For every wrong doing I do,

Forgive me for the yelling,
My anger and my woes,
All the lies I was selling,
Putting it on you but not my foes,

For all the senseless destroying,
Of every loving gift,
An when I was annoying,
Back on that long night shift,

I saw the error in my ways,
Though time may not be enough,
Only being a few days,
The changes weren't that though,

I got the wake up call,
Done the changes needed,
Ill do it all and more,
Just to feel completed.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    Good Job 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    Good Job 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by xxxclarizaxxx

    Hey long time no talk... great poem by the way... i enjoyed it a lot... keep it up your very talented with poems =D
    xx

  • 15 years ago

    by FiguringThisOutAsIGo

    This was also a really good poem! it was amazing and i loved it! gr8 job<3

  • 15 years ago

    by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life

    This is such a beautiful and meaningful poem. i can relate...only a few problems....just watch out for your punctuations. some of the words need apostrophes and some are incomplete....other than that i think the message in this poem was very strong and easy to relate to...also it gives the reader an insight on their own thoughts...so it did for me....only a great writer can write such a meaningful poem.
    Keep it up!

    Ada
    *aBSwaBHiaPL*

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