Life can give us no guaranties,
so much death and destruction
The meaning not clear to many
In drugs and alcohol lies seduction

This verse is so true to the core! From start
to finish this poem flowed smoothly. Liked it.

What a lovely poem :] One of hope and it really uplifted me. I really like the repeated stanza, it really added meaning to the poem. It was really well written and the flow was great :]
Your words were so true.. it was a really nice write :]
5/5

How i wuish i an beleve thsoe words today ingrid ,

but simply life these days , dotn flow throught me .^_^

great poem , but for me it is like fairy tales ..

good to read and dream about other then that
no other places ^_^

A very inspirational and true poem, the flow and wording blew me away! I loved how you repeated the first stanza later on in the poem, it had a nice effect. Straight from your heart, this really touched me! Take care, 5/5 from me...

5/5.Excellent.Loved to go through the flow of such wonderful feelings for the Almighty.Truth is Life.Just beautiful.God bless.

Amen. I felt that poem in my spirit. I'm working on my relationship with my Father. I know by reading this art work that if He csn use me, He can surely use me. Keep doing the best because I know we serve an awesome God.

Ingrid, waw, you poured out inspirational words that lingers in my mind and touches the heart.
"It takes courage to stand tall
amidst defeat and evil deeds
To be your own man at all times
and not give in to low needs". This is so true my friend. This poem is a win of course. It's the most touching i red since months. Very well done 5/5, kel.

That was my favorite poem of yours! So beautifuly written; I love your choice of words.

Through your poems you've taught me so much. Thank you,

mandy

5/5!!!

A nice rhyming poem Ingrid with a clear message.
Love.
A very inspiring piece.