Good job. I didn't understand the whole piercing miss line though. It just seemed to kill the flow cause I really didn't understand it. But, it is quite amazing how inspiring this poem is. How you can be hurt so much but get up and wait for them to realize how much you love them and will be there.
This one I like as well! I love the way you wrote it. With tears being a part of the second line in every stanza. This style is what I enjoy writing and reading best! So far, from what I've read, I really like your poems! 5/5