My Tears

by azii   Feb 1, 2009


I try to understand
my tears start to fall
how could it go wrong
we almost had it all

i remember every word
my tears start to flow
why did it have to end
the reason i don't know

i feel the piercing miss
my tears start to dance
i would kill, I'd die
to have just one more chance

i hear that same old song
my tears start to run
hard to accept the truth
how simply we are done

still
I'll keep this sweetest love
my tears start to dry
no love will get as true
as the love of you and i

i will go on trying
no tears left to see
I'll live on with the hope
that someday you'll love me

(c) azii

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  • 10 years ago

    by Dan

    Good job. I didn't understand the whole piercing miss line though. It just seemed to kill the flow cause I really didn't understand it. But, it is quite amazing how inspiring this poem is. How you can be hurt so much but get up and wait for them to realize how much you love them and will be there.

    -Dan

  • 10 years ago

    by mrsmoore

    This one I like as well! I love the way you wrote it. With tears being a part of the second line in every stanza. This style is what I enjoy writing and reading best! So far, from what I've read, I really like your poems! 5/5