Moment of affinity

by anonymous lover   Feb 16, 2009


Lips caressing
The suasiveness of the neck
Gentle voices giving out
Sweet murmurs of love
Slowly delving the others body,
Fulfilled with lover's passion
Tongues embracing each other
Later turning into a little dance
Hands helping to free themself
from the body's amour
that keeps them from feeling
each others fieriness
a pearl of sweat dripping off
his forehead; their hungry bodies
coalesce in another
enjoying a period of affinity
followed by a kindle of firework
and memorable pleasure.

Copyright 2009 D. Albert-Weiss

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Loved it =] The chioce of wording was beautiful and the flow was perfect. I really enjoyed this poem you captivated me with your descriptions so a def. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very well written I cannot find a thing to criticize here The sensual wording stirs much passion

    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Wow so passionate and breath takeing.

    good write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Great piece of poetry, I truly enjoyed:)
    You got across the deep emotions you feel when two lovers meet, really nice!

    Welcome to our club:)

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    This poem is so incredibly sweet... I am amazed :)

    *rock on* ;)

    isabel

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