OOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHH yes!
I am a chocolate lover too!!!
What a lovely and original poem you made, Kelleyana:)
It brightened up my evening, ha ha.
It was a real feel good poem. I loved the words you used and how it just flowed off the page:))

Very cute;)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

MMM CHOCOLATE!!! Great Write, Much Enjoyed!!!

This is one of the few poems I have read to stimulate the taste buds
Very well written

You expressed the sensation of choclate in a very detailed way. I find it a little hard to call this piece a poem. The first stanza had short lines and a few rhymings here and there, but the other stanzas had long lines with a little poetic context.
I liked the details and the words you chose to describe the choclate love, but try to shorter the lines a bit and make it more poetic.

Overall 4/5

Kel, you juz make me crave for chocolates right now...You just make it sound so delicious and tempting.I like that you just let the words flow out to the comfort of the readers tongue.

Excellent Job
5/5

Wonderful Write!!!