What makes me, me

by Faten   Feb 28, 2009


A beautiful face
a nice body
still i cant help
but feel insecurity

long brown hair
an outstanding personality
still i cant help
but feel insecurity

tall
thin
long
slim
but thats what everyone else thinks

flaws and imperfections
are all i see
how do i
get over my insecurities

ill think
of my good qualities
and how i am
a great person internally

ill keep a positive environment
all around me
and positive people
close supporting me

I'm going to always keep with me
that my flaws and imperfections are from everyone else
what separate me
they make me beautiful and are what makes me,
me.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Nice work, you are you, and you need to be comfortable with that. A very true write, something almost everybody goes through. But, i will say that again the rhymes seemed forced. Your flow was much better though in most parts. But over all its a good poem. =]

  • 15 years ago

    by benjamin

    :).. i like this poem it shows a personal belife .... love the concept and nice rhyming :) lol great job

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