Someone Is Alone Tonight

by Sourav   Mar 9, 2009


Someone is alone tonight
But that someone is not me
As I kiss her under the moonlight
I get the taste of extreme infinity.

Many nights my eyes searched for her
I was alone under the naked sky
But time is the same no longer
And the joy of life is no more shy.

So I can write a love poem tonight
Under the moonbeam, on her naked body
Let give love a new immense height
Where everything else feels extreme shoddy.

Far away, someone sings a melancholy song
But surely, that someone is not portraying me
Wind whirls as my kisses hold her along
Tonight, I've changed my destiny.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ocean Soul

    So touching your your piece of your work, man. It reminds me the sweet moments I spent with my boyfriend.
    Thanks for voting on mine.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nice love poem. Filled with joy because that someone alone tonight is not you. You are with the one you love. Good write. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a beautiful poem of love you have penned. Great imagery amd word choices.

    Far away, someone sings a melancholy song
    But surely, that someone is not portraying me
    Wind whirls as my kisses hold her along
    Tonight, I've changed my destiny.

    Beautiful ending. I love the way you used your metaphors.
    Excellent!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    How beautiful you described this love you have found...The title suggested something very different, a very clever way of making this poem more intense:)

    Excelllent write,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by sneha

    Someone is alone tonight
    But that someone is not me
    The way u started the poem is superb.every line is very sweet and reflects your bliss.enjoy.5

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