Immortal
by LitxUpxWithxLife Mar 21, 2009
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Around me swirls the dark void that binds my soul to a world unknown. A world alive, and anew, deep below this world, the real world; it shines with corrosion and corruption. A world where only the strong survive. A chaotic realm in which good and evil no longer are relevant; in this world only the strong survive and the brave possess Immortality. |
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15 years ago
Wow this was very impressive.. I loved your form here, of course it was in a paragraph, but that did not stop the flow.. word choice was great and youve definatly portrayed a deep dark poem here through your great word choice.
Well done!!
5/5.
