Amdist Morbid Depths

by Italian Stallion   Mar 27, 2009


Ye whom bloody screams,
is bound to be hanged.
Thee whom my enemy,
shall not be freed.

Rotting - a wooden bench,
Dead - a man [myself] full of stench.
And ye whom reads...
his old blackened diary,
shall soon be death-ed.

An unknown curse lurks
in thee horrid depths,
searching for thee possessed
to take as captive.

And ye whom bloody screams,
is bound to be hanged.
And thee whom my enemy,
shall not be freed.

© Copyright 2009 By: Italian Stallion

*Lacks some depth, yes I know - this was just a quick write in the form of Old English*

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  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Okay, first I would like to say I love how this is written in old english, that really caught my eye and was something different for a change.

    I thought this was a brilliant write and very unique too, great flow and wording, it just held my attention.

    Excellent job, no suggestions whatsoever.

    Keep writing, always and forever...

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by xx

    It reminds me of a pirate. XD I adore pirates. Haha. Nice flow.

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    I like how this was written in old english , and it's really gloomy . I get like a medieval time vibe from it , and it flows really nicely too . Really well done . 5/5

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