Daydreamin Memories About Him

This is cute.. i do agree that you use 'me' a bit to much but still a nice piece.. definatly think u should try different writing styles though, just for practise... very good.. i think many people can relate to your words

About him and me together,
I start getting nervous and cold all around.
Just thinking about him holding me,
Makes me smile a million times.

***I can soooo relate to that..I think it's really funny though, if you think about your beloved one and people just see you randomly smiling, looking at you weirdly..lol

Just thinking about him kissing me,
I begin to blush.
Just wondering if he feels the same when he's around me.

***wow..i can also really relate to that. I totally know how you feel..

Does he get nervous like I do?
Do I make him smile, cross his handsome face like he does to me?
He knows exactly what to say when I feel down.
His lovely words always going though my mind.

*** These are exactly the same questions I always ask myself..but although I try to put myself into his shoes, it's often hard to read a guy (or at least my)..://

It just seems things will always get better,
When he's right by my side.
He gives me hope.
He gives me more then he imagines.
Just thinking about him and me together,
Holding each other's hands,
Looking at each other's eyes.
The day can't get any better.
With him I can be with forever.

*** I think overall you did a nice job but if I would be you I would try to write something more "extraordinary"..how about you have a look at stylistic devices (metaphors, simile, enjambement...). We studied them in school and since then, I improved a lot...:)
just a hint..

I want to start off by saying.. I understand that the perspective in this piece is first person, but you should never use a word so much like you have me.. its just way overused, I think that writing in a first person perspective you can find different ways of wording sentences so that you can eliminate a bunch of those words.

I would provide you with an example, but I'm not good with rhyming. Maybe youd consider going the free-verse route, I find that much easier.. cause rhyming becomes forced.

You did an okay job with this poem, probably just 'good'.. it wasnt a bad poem, I think a lot could relate to what youre trying to say here.. wondering if that person thinks/feels the same way you do for them.

An okay write.. definatly I think it has the potential to be better though.

Temps.
[Beyond a Poets Mind]

Just thinking about him and me together,
I start getting nervous and cold all around.
Just thinking about him holding me,
Makes me smile a million times.
^^ahh...the reminiscing of memories i could so relate to this i mean i have so many of these flashbacks and while they are happening it seems so real like you just had it happen yesterday than someone snaps you out of your drifting and you are forced to face reality : /

Just thinking about him kissing me,
I begin to blush.
Just wondering if he feels the same when he's around me.
Does he get nervous like I do?
Do I make him smile, cross his handsome face like he does to me?
^^tehehe...i have someone who has this affect on me to and it is hard to try and ignore someone who has that kind of pull on you!!! whenever i wonder about a guy and this kind of thing i put myself in his shoes and try to answer the question i am wondering sometimes the answer hurts though ...

He knows exactly what to say when I feel down.
His lovely words always going though my mind.
It just seems things will always get better,
When he's right by my side.
^^he is your rock and that is the beautiful thing and problem : / when you make someone your rock it gives them the power to bring you down and the thing is your emotions tend to have control over what guy has that power over you and it's isn't always the best choice : /

He gives me hope.
He gives me more then he imagines.
Just thinking about him and me together,
Holding each other's hands,
Looking at each other's eyes.
The day can't get any better.
With him I can be with forever.
^^aww so in love!!! this was a cuter part of the poem different from being sad about him leaving or something it was a good change of pace the only thing is that the last two lines were a little to cliche if you ask me maybe if you could play with the words and see if something better could come out of it

ok so a title suggestion....
Playful Memories

Very well written passionate poem

it seems that "just thing about him" would be a fitting title