Ya.

by xx   Apr 5, 2009


Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.
Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.
Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.
Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.
Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.
Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.
Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.

Sorry, I was young.

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  • 15 years ago

    by x3 TinyDancer3000 x3

    I totally agree with LadyLuck. You are such a great writer being young and all and never give up on this guy. He seems real sweet! Keep up the great work. 5/5!

  • 15 years ago

    by RoseBlood

    Well, it is always a tie whether he sees you as a friend or something more. May be because you show that you love him, he can't clearly see what he really feels for you, because from as much as I've experienced, guys act a little cruel when they find out someone loves them you know, and then they say they love the first other girl they see on the road(If you know what I mean).
    Look, don't lose hope, and it's a good thing you say you will wait for him, even though forever is a long time. I just hope he won't realize he loves you too when he'll lose you(by that I mean you falling for someone else, eventually).
    Great poem. You do have a talent for rhyming, you know that?
    5/5 :) Keep it up, and don't give up on him.