Since Love is Forever

by PygmyPuff   Apr 8, 2009


The first kiss prophesizes
Potential eternal affection;
Equally: distraction,
Similarly: dysfunctions.

Advancing time brings forth
All predictions in truth;
Unexcited and overwhelming,
Eventually overcoming.

Time apart, unstable;
Together so magical.
A future predetermined
By everlasting fate.

Soul mates forever,
Threatened and destined.
With lives expected
To live forever?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jad

    This was an over all good poem. Though it did did seem to be a little rough at some places. The flow was good and the emotion was good as well. So for this poem I give it a good job once again for trying.

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    Your writing style for this one is really fast , and reads kind of rough some places . I like the idea of how the first kiss leads is kind of a preview .. Because that's more than true . I also like how you ended it with a question , because it's interesting and makes you think . Check the punctuation though .. Cause a couple of them are messed up . 5/5 for this one .

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