Maybe it's a Dream

by PygmyPuff   Apr 16, 2009


Your face dances across my eyelids,
and they flutter as I breathe.
I feel your body touching mine,
or maybe it's a dream.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jad

    This was a nice poem. And the imagery was good. the emotion in it was good. the flow was good as well. There was nothing really wrong with this poem and the only thing i would change is how short it is. Good Job.
    P. S. My grandmother really liked thi s poem. Good job.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I liked this..it makes me wonder. Nice work. Shanik