Perfect Me

by Not Enough   Apr 10, 2009


*** Not sure what category to put it in. So yeah.
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I stare into my mirror, and I try finding everything I hate
Yet there's nothing I can find that I don't think is great
There's nothing bad I can see as I look at my reflection
From head to toe, inside and out I can only see perfection

Hair perfect for me; short cut, purple, pink, and blue
It shines in the light and softens all the way through
Crimping at the ends as it hangs down across my face
Straightened shape of perfection and a messy disgrace

Eyes perfect for me; perfectly shaped coffee beans
Sweet little chocolate drops; the eyes meant for queens
Mocha rings wrap the colour as they sparkle in the light
With a touch of hazelnut flames forming as they ignite

A nose perfect for me; the ideal peach from a peach tree
Round, soft, small, and cute; everyone would agree
The best of them all; right colour, right shape, right size
The perfect nose surrounded by the perfect cherry pies

Cheeks perfect for me; chubby, cute little cherry pies
The cheeks that won over all the girls and the guys
Adorable cherry blossoms blossoming all year round
But only when the sweetness of the smile surrounds

A smile perfect for me; brightens the day with delight
Sugary pink candy treats surrounding pearls of white
Delicate, ruby red lines flow across from cheek to cheek
Painted glitter across each lip; creating a smile so unique

A body perfect for me; forty pounds over weight, perfection
Perfectly curved in all the right places; an ideal reflection
A great body maybe not for most, but for me it's just right
Because when I look in the mirror, I see a gorgeous sight

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  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Loved it to the end! x

  • 14 years ago

    by No Need For A Name

    It's a good poem, but not great. Each line seems to be too long, which makes the reader bored and doesn't compell them to read it. Ansd, although I am extremly happy you see perfection, the entire poem seems to be very narcassictic, and it is very difficult for the reader to get into a poem so self-centered.

    Peace and prosperity,

    (RKD)

  • 14 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Wow i actually love this poem so many girls now a days only ponder the things they think are wrong with their bodies and if you want to find imperfection, it will be there. It was unique to watch or read someone admiring the assets God has blessed them with! I think it is great that you can cherish the amazing parts about your figure. If you are confident about the way you look others will be as well!
    great adjectives girly! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Lori

    You are a very talented writer! I love this poem. I love it. You have confidence in yourself and I love it. You pick out every feature of yourself and say something good about it. I love it. It's brilliant. And many people don't have the confidence to write something like this. And it makes me happy women still have the confidense in them.

    Cheeks perfect for me; chubby, cute little cherry pies
    The cheeks that won over all the girls and the guys
    Adorable cherry blossoms blossoming all year round
    But only when the sweetness of the smile surrounds

    ^Beautiful. The word choice has a great flow to it. You put alot of emotion into this. But the thing is, it's not for someone else. It's for yourself, and I really like that concept.

    A smile perfect for me; brightens the day with delight
    Sugary pink candy treats surrounding pearls of white
    Delicate, ruby red lines flow across from cheek to cheek
    Painted glitter across each lip; creating a smile so unique

    ^I'm sure you have a lovely smile. :) The uniqueness in this piece is so outstanding. I've never seen anything quite like this one.

    A body perfect for me; forty pounds over weight, perfection
    Perfectly curved in all the right places; an ideal reflection
    A great body maybe not for most, but for me it's just right
    Because when I look in the mirror, I see a gorgeous sight

    ^Wonderful closing. I really love it. I enjoyed this piece truly. Keep writing because it's good. lol let me know if you want me to read anything else. I really enjoy your work.
    <3 Loni

  • 14 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This is a poem I think people would be inspired to read. You bring out a lot of passion and confidence in the writing. It flows perfectly. 5/5

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