Indeed, when we are in love our heart is smiling, beautifully put, dear Silvia.
Isn't love the most beautiful feeling in the world?
Just today I met someone , a client, who lit the spark again..I saw him and my heart went boom!, ha ha..can't wait to see him again!
Love the form, I've never heard of this form before, maybe Ill try it myself. :]
"My heart swells with pride tonight,"
`I loved the usage of swells and was happy to see the first line be so happy and uplifting.
"to know that you love me, makes my world complete."
`Aww cute and simply said :]
"My heart smiles with rich delight,"
`I didnt like the repetition of heart :| but thought you did well with 'rich delight'
"my soul sings a song so sweet,"
`Good job switching it up and saying soul and not heart. But still, you may want to find a way of removing the 2nd heart so that it doesnt seem like your words are as repetitive. I really love your alliterations in this line, this line was full of them. Wonderful job :]
"because of you my love, my heart skips a beat."
`To be brutally honest with you, my heart skips a beat is cliche, and not at all original.. spice it up and make it your own.
A sweet love poem, your syllable count was right on but other places need some work, I think.