:)

Indeed, when we are in love our heart is smiling, beautifully put, dear Silvia.
Isn't love the most beautiful feeling in the world?
Just today I met someone , a client, who lit the spark again..I saw him and my heart went boom!, ha ha..can't wait to see him again!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Sylvia,

Another gem from you. You really are an inspiration to us all. I see your work and just think - I want to be able to write like this! You make any form seem so effortless.

I love the alliteration in the forth line, for me it links the whole piece.

Well done

Michael

What a beautiful Lyria Sylvia :)

Love the form, I've never heard of this form before, maybe Ill try it myself. :]

"My heart swells with pride tonight,"
`I loved the usage of swells and was happy to see the first line be so happy and uplifting.

"to know that you love me, makes my world complete."
`Aww cute and simply said :]

"My heart smiles with rich delight,"
`I didnt like the repetition of heart :| but thought you did well with 'rich delight'

"my soul sings a song so sweet,"
`Good job switching it up and saying soul and not heart. But still, you may want to find a way of removing the 2nd heart so that it doesnt seem like your words are as repetitive. I really love your alliterations in this line, this line was full of them. Wonderful job :]

"because of you my love, my heart skips a beat."
`To be brutally honest with you, my heart skips a beat is cliche, and not at all original.. spice it up and make it your own.

A sweet love poem, your syllable count was right on but other places need some work, I think.

Good job.

Temps [Beyond a Poets Mind]

It is short but sweet.

This is the sweetest little verse of love I've
read..and its filled with such warmth...very
nice :)

Very sweet, Sylvia :-)

Hi Sylvia,

The poem is perfect. I can see and feel through the flow of words you made. Congrats!

Dis poem should of been better

Exquisite Write!!!

Amazing work!

Though short, this piece captivates one's heart with every word, knowing that it comes from deep within an honest heart.
An enjoyable read.
Paul...

Nice to read a poem celebrating the joys of love. It can take us so low but can also take us so high. Well done.