The Lost Puppy

by Mello193   Apr 23, 2009


So there's a picture of you
and a picture of me
a heart is in between us
but what does it mean

and i a lost puppy
or someone of value
and am i annoying
when i want to do something with you

id like to know
just what you think of me
we don't know one another well
but on the walks you let me lead

and am i a lost puppy
do you even care to know
just tell me you want me there
or tell me to go

anythings fine
i guess i cool with that
but i cant help feel
there's a knife in my back

and am i the lost puppy
for a day you enjoy
or what it just a day
a girl and her toy

maybe ages apart
and know not your face
but i cant help but feel
that this is my place

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  • 14 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    The idea is really cute .. Maybe do a syllable check to fix the flow up a little bit , and you can definately add to it a bit .. But like i said , really cute :) . Really well donee .

  • 14 years ago

    by Deana

    I think there are times we all feel like a lost puppy...you express it very well. A great write to someone who must be very special.

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