Suicide (Tanka Poem)

by NiQk   Apr 26, 2009


Agonizing pain
Lost lives of suffering souls
Forever taken
Years of self mutilation
Have all led to suicide

Syllables
5,7,5,7,7.

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  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is wow. You start off really bold and end with a lot of simplicity. For so few words it is amazing and has such power, granted it is depressing, but you get my point. 5/5 for sure.

  • 14 years ago

    by Esther

    Lol, I like this, it made me smile, even though I kind of think that was an undesired effect, but I like it.

  • 14 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    Great poem i loved the style and the way you worded it 5/5 keep it up

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