Nothing to fear

by Cale   May 9, 2009


When will you come around.
We both know that this is real.
But you wont give me a chance.
A chance to show how i feel.

One night you take my hand.
The next you take my heart.
Then you change your mind.
And your tearing me apart.

I know there are other girls.
They would love a chance.
But i don't want them.
Because YOU make my heart dance.

You waste your time on others.
They don't realize what they are missing.
They break your heart and let you go.
When I'm the one that you should be kissing.

Why do you like him?
He will only bring pain.
When you could be with me.
And be kissing in the rain.

You say that all guys are the same.
They hurt you and will never come around.
But I'm not every other guy.
I'm the one guy that will never let you down.

Why am i not good enough?
I have been here the whole time.
Watching the tears because he hurt you again.
This wont happen once you are mine.

I know that you are scared
You don't want to ruin a friendship
Just grab my hand.
I wont let you slip.

There will always be hope.
I will always be here.
I have my whole life to wait.
You have nothing to fear.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This is a really emotionally honest and heart warmng poem =] I found it a really beautifull piece overall - The person above me was right this girl cant see that the best person for her has always been right infront of her ^^

  • 14 years ago

    by Hallo A Lilium

    Brava! Yet again. Another touching piece. It was very endearing. It grabbed a hold of my heart. You really love this person that is mentioned. It's delicate and intensely emotional. You long for her to notice you in the way you notice her. Very nice wording and it held a future hope. You enlightened her that you would wait forever to be her man. To
    inform her that pain will not happen with you. That you would not subject her to the heartache. This was ardent and beautiful. You professed your love. And spoke of warmth and protection. Very brilliant piece.
    *applauds*
    5/5

    -Lilium

  • 14 years ago

    by Lauran

    Wow Cale.
    This was really amazing.
    I don't think this girl knows what
    she's missing out on.

    You're great.
    :)
    Ily.

  • 14 years ago

    by flutterflies

    The flow of your poem is simply amazing.

    "One night you take my hand.
    The next you take my heart.
    Then you change your mind.
    And your tearing me apart."

    That to me is the strongest verse and so many people relate directly to it.

    In it, you posed questions. I think maybe a continuation of this would make it work better as it esatbishes a pattern.

    Otherwise you poem is really well written with all the rhyming lines/

  • 14 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a really good poem. it is easy to see how you feel about this girl, and the pain behind your words as well. A very good job. 5/5

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