by amandalynn May 17, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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I can't look in your eyes |
by Lady Nik
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I like how you repeated the lines "my horrible fate". I think you should have done that more. It was very clever and also effective. Other than that this was a good piece. Nik |
by Good Enough
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This poem was really good. It makes u feel ur fear. very well written :) |