Confessions

by Bre Monique   May 19, 2009


When he smiles, so do I.
His laugh makes me happy.
I aim to please him.
I hate seeing him upset but I love comforting him.
His hands fit perfectly with mine.
I adore the way he holds me.
I hate when he lets go.
I constantly wonder if I'm worthy.
I think he deserves the world.
I wish I could give it to him.
I hate saying goodbye.
He tells me he loves me everyday.
I believe him.
I trust him.
I love him.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This was a very sweet poem, the whole concept of you confessing was cute, and made me smile! Good luck with your relationship, it sounds like you two are madly in love.

    My only problem that I saw was how many times you used "I", "me" and "he" etc.

    Maybe try being a bit more unique and find way to go around saying "I......" all the time.

    4/5 from me, heartfelt emotions and feelings throughout this piece.

    Take care and God Bless!

    ~MaryAnne

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