Live In This Moment

by Poetic Tragedy08   May 23, 2009


*NOTE* I'm re-attempting writing songs, let me know!!

A late night of this illusion in my head
I'm walking this street hoping to find a better way
I'll let the wind carry me to where the lights shine
But I hardly believe anything these days

All of your words flow so easily in my head
But I hardly believe anything these days
My body is only trembeling in forsaken memories
So stop, and walk by like we don't remember

*Chorus*
And I
I wont forget you, but I dont want to remember
Lord knows I'm hurting deep down
But these memories are what hold me
When these thoughts become the shadows of my feelings

I once thought you were heaven sent
With eyes that came from above
I try to convince my friends you're all I need
But they'll stop like rain and pour down these heavy thoughts

*Chorus*
And I
I won't forget you, but I don't want to remember
Lord knows I'm hurting deep down
But these memories are what hold me
When these thoughts become the shadows of my feelings

*Bridge*
And when you walked up to me that day
With those bloodshot eyes
Telling me you loved me but never wanted to see this heart again
Well there's five seconds of my life that I won't be getting back

*Chorus* And I
I won't forget you, but I don't want to remember
Lord knows I'm hurting deep down
But these memories are what hold me
When these thoughts become the shadows of my feelings

And that night we said goodbye...

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I liked these lyrics a lot however I feel you need to work on your flow to allow your lyrics to seem more catchy

    Still good write

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I can't seem to get the rhythm though I am certain it is in your head

  • 14 years ago

    by flutterflies

    'But I hardly believe anything these days

    But these memories are what hold me'

    Those are your two strongest lines in the piece, so keep coming back to those. So far you have an amazing song.

    What I can only say is to use a wonder range of words. You so far have good repetition and rhyming in the first verse, but make sure you keep it uniform.

    Other then that, it is beautifully written!

    ~Ally